This Week's 150-Word Editor Blog on Writing: Compression - Posted 11/23/2015

CompressAh yes, the all too familiar mantra. Compress, compress, and compress some more. “No unnecessary words,” writing teachers preach, as if words were flakes of gold to be hoarded and guarded. I was in a creative writing class once, where the instructor recommended that I shorten “Mr. Finley had a neatly combed head of thinning gray hair, split down the middle, and an equally neat and gray mustache, shaved sharply at the two opposing ends” into “Mr. Finley had thin gray hair, and gray mustache shaved sharply at the ends.” I understood that the revised sentence contained all of the “essential” information from the original, and that it had a certain utilitarian appeal. But where was the soul? When I wrote and read the original sentence, it felt alive and frothy. When I read the revised version, it felt cold and flat. There is definitely an allure, and a sort of Icelandic beauty, in sparsity; Hemingway’s short pieces are a testament to this fact. But given a choice between the two extremes, I have to go with verbosity. Life is seldom straightforward, and you sometimes need a lot words to convey its complexities. Happy Thanksgiving everyone! (Read more blogs here)

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